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  • This is love

    Based on 1 John 4

    http://soundcloud.com/richjens/this-is-love

    Lyrics:

    This is love
    Not that we have loved God
    But that He first loved us
    and sent His Son

    He gave His life
    He was the sacrifice
    That took the sin and wrath
    And brought us peace

    If God so loved us
    So we should love one another
    If God so loved us
    So we should love

    Such love
    Such love
    Such love that came down for us

    If we love one another
    God abides in us
    And his love that is perfect
    Is perfected in us
    http://soundcloud.com/richjens
    http://richjens.bandcamp.com/

  • #2
    What a great song! For
    and sent His Son
    and
    And brought us peace
    I would have liked to hear the last word be on the same note as the word before. The important word in the phrase is getting lost and it would brighten up the phrase a bit. The music has a beautiful flow to it.

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    • #3
      Hi Dolce

      Thanks for the feedback. Yes, the final word is getting lost a bit so I'll have a play with it later. Glad you like it.
      http://soundcloud.com/richjens
      http://richjens.bandcamp.com/

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      • #4
        Great song. The words you used from I John are so profound, yet so simple, and you have done a great job balancing profoundness and simplicity.
        Thanks for sharing with us.
        Tom

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        • #5
          Thanks Tom. Yes, 1 John is full of profound yet simple truth.
          http://soundcloud.com/richjens
          http://richjens.bandcamp.com/

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