Couple of things that jump out....
What is the purpose of the cans mounted on the truss behind the platform? They seem more like a distraction than anything else, looking at the pictures.
Looks like the side monitor is getting washed out by the lighting. The upper one a little bit, too. If your primary goal is to make the lyrics readable, your lighting may be overkill.
I like the setup. To bad there doesn't seem to be a way to get overhead lighting in center, and do away with the stuff washing to the sides. Could you move those monitors down in front of the side trusses, maybe just inside the speakers? Get them closer to the congregation and that might help.