Feedback on some originals...

[jessea]

Hi everyone,

I was looking for some critiques on some songs I've written. You can listen to them all by going to www.jesseauciello.com (http://www.jesseauciello.com) (this will redirect you to a myspace page). You can download them from the player as well.

Please let me know what you think. Keep in mind, these are not final recordings by any means, just demos... so I'm more interested in the songs themselves than the recordings of the songs.

Thanks!
Jesse Auciello

[Milestoneworship]

You definitely have a songwriter's gift. I think that you kind of intuitively understand the demands of worship songs, namely, they have to be simple in lyric and melody. I think "Home Forever" is probably the most original of the bunch, although I think that you might consider taking another look at the chord voices that you are using for your arrangements. Each of these songs have a kind of "sameness" that differing chord voicings and guitar tuning would probably fix.

Great stuff! Keep it going!

[El Ben]

I'm so rocking out to You Are right now. It's such a fun, upbeat song. I'd like to see what a very U2-ish noodling guitar intro would sound like with it.

[jessea]

U2ish would be cool. Unfortunately, I am not much of an electric player, so the demo is what it is. When I do a full length album, I'd love to find a creative electric guitar player for some neat parts.